The ultimate bounce

It's been almost three months since my last blog post, and I could sit here and tell you a million reasons why I haven't been around, but I'm pretty sure you don't want to hear them, and I'm not sure they're all that fascinating anyway. What I will say is that life has been interesting and I've just been going with the flow, and learning, and growing, and taking each day as it comes.

I had a rough 2012. Those who know me personally will smile when they read that, because they know it's an understatement. But the great thing about having a rough year is that the following year seems pretty damn good. And I'm happy to say that's the place I'm in right now. I've moved, I've settled in completely to a new neighborhood and new apartment, and I'm surrounded by an amazing number of people who've lifted me up, made me laugh, and reminded me that life doesn't always suck.

In short, I've bounced back.

I heard a lot of cliches over the past year and a half, well-meaning stuff like "This too shall pass" and "Time heals all wounds", and while there were moments when I heard those things and wanted to stab the person saying them, they're true. They really are true. You can have the worst thing in the world (in your mind, anyway) happen to you, and bounce back. You can be hurt and betrayed and shattered, and bounce back. You can love someone who completely and utterly breaks your heart, skews your vision of the future you thought you had, making you question everything you used to believe about life and love and commitment and loyalty... and still bounce back.

So that's all I wanted to say. I'm still here, I'm still writing the third book, and I'm a work in progress like everyone else.

I'm bouncing. How about you?

Las Vegas, March 2013, girls' weekend. Definitely a fun part of the bounce-back experience!

P.S. Almost forgot to mention that FREAK is now out in paperback! Woo hoo!


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Toronto Book Lover's Ball

I had the most amazing, magical time at the Book Lover's Ball last night, which is an event to support the Toronto Public Library (which just happens to be the the busiest urban library in the world). I was invited to to attend the ball as a "celebrity author" (don't giggle!) and I had the most beautiful time. Last night reminded me how much I love being a writer, how much I love meeting other writers, and how great it is to talk to people who love books. Though I've lived in the Toronto area most of my life, it was my first time at the Fairmont Royal York. What a lovely, grand hotel.

All dressed up and ready to go!

The ballroom was huge!

Lots of beautiful people all dressed up.

Table 10, my table!

The team at Simon & Schuster Canada (my publisher here) made sure I had a great time. This is Max Arambulo, publicity guru at S&S.

And this is Felicia Quon, Director of Marketing at Simon & Schuster Canada.

There was all kinds of entertainment (yes, I found the man on the screen very entertaining)...

And a fashion show of sorts...

And I got to spend some time with my lovely friend Laurie Grassi, the books editor at Chatelaine magazine.

Hanging out with author Brad Smith (we didn't realize we have the same agent in New York, Victoria Skurnick!), Max, Laurie, and Felicia.

Having a great time with one of my beautiful table mates, Mary.

And another gorgeous table mate, whose name has fallen out of my head now! Must have had too much wine, but she was lovely.

And unwinding in the bar at the end of the night with the S&S team and their authors, including the very dashing Andrew Pyper, author of THE DEMONOLOGIST (out in March).

All in all, it was a fabulous event, and I hope I get to go again! The dinner was absolutely delicious (steak!) and they even catered to my food allergies. We writers don't get many opportunities to feel glamorous, and every girl needs a night out like this once in awhile. I was so flattered and happy to be part of something this worthwhile, and the Toronto Library raised a lot of money through everyone's donations and the silent auction. Fun for a good cause!

Hope your year is off to a great start!

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Lisa Regan: 10 Things I Wish I'd Known Before I Sent My First Query

I'm happy to have fellow suspense author Lisa Regan at The Serial Killer Files today! Lisa offered to share what she's learned about publishing and what she wishes she'd known before she started querying.

Her debut novel, FINDING CLAIRE FLETCHER, is out now.

Two books. Six years from query to contract. 238 Agent rejections. 11 Publisher rejections.

It was a long, hard road. Especially because the feedback I got from both agents and publishers was very positive. They usually couched their rejection in glowing praise: "This is a great book." "These are strong projects." "You're a great writer." "I was on the edge of my seat reading this." "In many ways, this book is a home run." "It was very, very close."

Pass.

It wasn't something I could work on. It's not like they were saying my characters were flat or my plot had holes or my pacing was off. Those types of things can be fixed. Being "great" but getting passed on over and over? I was never quite sure what to do with that.

Still. I learned a lot of things from query to contract and here are the top ten tips I wish someone had given me back in 2006 before I sent out my first query:

1.    Don't let any agent or publisher read your book until it's really ready. Don't be in a hurry. Do the work to make it what I like to think of as "shelf-worthy". In other words, before it lands on the desk, or more likely the e-reader, of an agent or editor, it should be so tightly constructed and polished that it reads the same as any book you might pull off a shelf at your local bookstore. To get to that point, see #2.

2.    Get critique partners and beta readers. Use them. A lot. Ask both writers and regular old readers to read your manuscript and polish it up as best you can based on their advice. You'll need at least 5. I recommend a number closer to 10. Do not use people who have any emotional attachment to you. They will not be honest with you.

3.    Pay attention to your entire book. Plenty of people can write a fabulous opening chapter. But to get published, the entire book has to hold together. It has to make sense all the way through. Also you can't start out with a thriller and end as a romantic suspense novel. It won't work. If you're not sure your book makes sense or you're not even sure what type of book you're writing, see #2.

4.    Make sure your word count is within the acceptable range. I understand for my genre it's between 85,000 and 110,000 although the high range is frowned on, especially for debut novelists. Your "great" book will be rejected if it's too long.

5.    Don't be afraid to cut--words, scenes, subplots--to make the book shelf-worthy and keep your word count down. Not sure what to cut? See #2.

FINDING CLAIRE FLETCHER is out now! Click HERE to purchase.

6.    When an agent is on their second pass and they say they want to make a list of suggestions and go over them with you to see if you're both on the same page before offering representation--that means they're not going to sign you. That's a no. Take it as such.

7.    If an agent loves your book but passes anyway, ask for a referral. They'll usually give you one and although it certainly doesn't guarantee a contract, it will usually result in the referral agent at least reading your work.

8.    If you've sent out 10 queries and gotten no response, send more. I hate to break it to you, but 10 queries is not a lot. It is barely a drop in the bucket. If you've sent out 25 to 50 and gotten no response, then you might need to rework your pitch.

9.    Network, network, network. Find other writers and make friends with them. You'd be amazed how much easier rejection is to take when you've got a bunch of writer friends in your corner. Support them in their endeavors. We're all headed in the same direction. We need to help each other out.

10.    Do. Not. Stop. Keep writing, keep honing your craft, keep querying. This business is so hard. But if you've got a good book and you keep working at it, chances are that something will break eventually. If you stop, that won't happen for you. When you think it's madness to continue is exactly when you need to forge ahead and keep going.

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FREAK is out in the UK!

Very excited to share that Little Brown, my UK publisher, has launched The Crime Vault today, a site featuring some of the best digital titles in crime fiction!


For my UK friends, please click here to download FREAK.


Oh, and Happy December, everyone!

FREAK - Gangnam style!

Just kidding! Made you look! It's FREAK, UK style.

I'm excited to reveal my UK cover for FREAK, which launches December 1st in the UK as part of my publisher Little Brown's Crime Vault family! You can download a sampler of some of the Crime Vault books here.


Have I mentioned how lucky I've been with my covers? I'm not exaggerating; every single one has been gorgeous so far.

In fact, I think maybe we should celebrate gangnam style. This song was already all over the Philippines when I was there in September. All my cousins were doing the moves . . . and of course, hilarity ensued.




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Show & Tell in a Nutshell!

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I'm happy to feature my writing friend Jessica Bell today, who's written a book called SHOW & TELL IN A NUTSHELL: Demonstrated Transitions from Telling to Showing.

Have you been told there's a little too much telling in your novel? Want to remedy it? Then this is the book for you!

In Show & Tell in a Nutshell: Demonstrated Transitions from Telling to Showing you will find sixteen real scenes depicting a variety of situations, emotions, and characteristics which clearly demonstrate how to turn telling into showing. Dispersed throughout, and at the back of the book, are blank pages to take notes as you read. A few short writing prompts are also provided.

Not only is this pocket guide an excellent learning tool for aspiring writers, but it is a light, convenient, and easy solution to honing your craft no matter how broad your writing experience. Keep it in the side pocket of your school bag, throw it in your purse, or even carry it around in the pocket of your jeans or jacket, to enhance your skills, keep notes, and jot down story ideas, anywhere, anytime.

If you purchase the e-book, you will be armed with the convenient hyper-linked Contents Page, where you can toggle backward and forward from different scenes with ease. Use your e-reader's highlighting and note-taking tools to keep notes instead.

The author, Jessica Bell, also welcomes questions via email, concerning the content of this book, or about showing vs. telling in general, at showandtellinanutshell@gmail.com

Reviews:
“Jessica Bell addresses one of the most common yet elusive pieces of writing advice—show, don't tell—in a uniquely user-friendly and effective way: by example. By studying the sixteen scenes she converts from “telling” into “showing,” not only will you clearly understand the difference; you will be inspired by her vivid imagery and dialogue to pour through your drafts and do the same.” ~Jenny Baranick, College English Teacher, Author of Missed Periods and Other Grammar Scares
“A practical, no-nonsense resource that will help new and experienced writers alike deal with that dreaded piece of advice: show, don’t tell. I wish Bell’s book had been around when I started writing!” ~Talli Roland, bestselling author

Purchase the paperback:
$4.40 on Amazon US
£3.99 on Amazon UK

Purchase the e-book:
$1.99 on Amazon US
£1.99 on Amazon UK
$1.99 on Kobo

About the Author:
The Australian-native contemporary fiction author and poet, Jessica Bell, also makes a living as an editor and writer for global ELT publishers (English Language Teaching), such as Pearson Education, HarperCollins, Macmillan Education, Education First and Cengage Learning.

She is the Co-Publishing Editor of Vine Leaves Literary Journal, and co-hosts the Homeric Writers’ Retreat & Workshop on the Greek Isle of Ithaca, with Chuck Sambuchino of Writer’s Digest.

For more information about Jessica Bell, please visit: 
Website
Blog
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THE MISTAKEN by Nancy S. Thompson


HAPPY HALLOWEEN!

I'm so happy to have my good friend and fellow psychological suspense writer Nancy S. Thompson at The Serial Killer Files today! Her debut novel, THE MISTAKEN, was released on October 18th from Sapphire Star Publishing, and I couldn't be more thrilled for her.


Thanks for hosting me today, Jennifer.  As a fellow author of a psychological thriller, Jennifer asked me to write a little something on villains. I’m doing so in the aftermath of the Aurora, Colorado shooting in which twelve people were killed and fifty-eight others injured during the opening night screening of The Dark Knight Rises

In sight of this tragedy, it seems natural to grapple for some kind of meaning, a reason why the killer did what he did. This is always important when writing villains into fiction. Whereas in reality, we often don’t know or even care the rationale behind the crime, in fiction, the reader must have a basic understanding behind the antagonist’s actions.

It would be easy to conjure up a straight-out psycho Dr. Evil-type of villain, but much more difficult to create one with whom the reader can sympathize or even empathize, that is to understand the reasoning behind his or her actions, to realize they have some justification for what they’re doing. Oddly enough, it won’t work for a writer to base their villain on those taken from real-life headlines. It’s that whole life-is-stranger-than-fiction thing. 

Jennifer wrote this post on Canadian killer Luka Magnotta, explaining how she’d never get away with creating a villain so moronic and sloppy. Why can’t we create villains like this?  Because not only are they not clever—a trait we love in our bad guys—but they’re not sympathetic, that is to say, we can’t possibly understand the reasoning behind their plan.  And therefore, they prove unbelievable, the one trait readers cannot tolerate in their fiction.

Often, these real-life maniacal killers—like at Virginia Tech or Colombine—commit suicide rather than risk being caught. So then all we ever hear about is how troubled they were, loners, bullied and misunderstood.  Even so, it’s difficult, if not impossible, to comprehend any justification behind their crimes.

Authors of fiction must examine and explore the mind of their antagonist so that readers can have some inkling of where they might go next and why. Readers want to know why the bad guy feels justified in doing such awful things. In my own novel, THE MISTAKEN, readers discover a long-held secret of past transgressions, so in the end, they can say, “Aha! That’s why the Russian mob guys hated them so much, why they wanted their own brand of vengeance.” They weren’t just evil for evil’s sake. They had family they loved and lost, just like the protagonist. They have a history just as rich. 

A good way to express the villain’s malevolence toward the protagonist is to show the damage his actions have on the main character’s emotions. Balance each act of evil against the protagonist’s wellbeing and tendency toward action or inaction. How does it impact his life, and how will he react? Does he spiral out of control, or will he find some way to overcome? 

The evil of the villain must have some equilibrium with the inherent decency of the good guy. The push of the hero must be compatible to the pull of the villain. That is to say, just as the bad guy should not be pure, psychotic evil, neither should the hero be all goodness and sunshine. They must each straddle both the dark side and that of justice in order to be believable and, therefore, relatable.   

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Guys, please visit Nancy’s blog, follow, and leave a comment during her book tour for a chance to win an ARC of THE MISTAKEN. Plus, she's giving away ebooks to five runner-ups!

You can also find her at Sapphire Star Publishing, Goodreads, Twitter, and Facebook

Purchase THE MISTAKEN here:  
Amazon
Amazon Kindle
Barnes & Noble
B&N Nook
Sapphire Star Publishing

THE MISTAKEN will soon be available at Sony, Kobo, iBooks, Diesel Bookstore, and Baker & Taylor.

Early praise for THE MISTAKEN:

“Nancy S. Thompson's debut novel, THE MISTAKEN, is a first-rate thriller full of hair-raising twists and turns.  Pursued by the police and the Russian mafia in San Francisco, brothers Tyler and Nick Karras are fascinating, fully-drawn, desperate characters.  The action is non-stop.  Thompson's taut, intriguing tale of revenge, mistaken identity, kidnapping and murder will keep you enthralled and entertained.”
   ~ Kevin O’Brien, New York Times Bestselling Author of DISTURBED and TERRIFIED

“A deliciously slow burn that builds to a ferocious crescendo, Nancy S. Thompson's THE MISTAKEN kept me riveted until the very last page. Tyler Karras is a complex and flawed protagonist, and his redemptive journey makes him the perfect anti-hero. This psychological suspense is a standout, and I can't wait for Thompson's next book.”
   ~ Jennifer Hillier, author of CREEP and FREAK

“Fast-paced and emotionally gripping - once the ride begins, you won't stop reading until it ends."
   ~ Alex J. Cavanaugh, author of CASSAFIRE and CASSASTAR


The Mistaken Blog tour:

10/23:  Julie Musil
10/25:  Matthew MacNish
10/26:  LG Smith
10/27: Aimee Jodoin
11/19:  Arlee Bird

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